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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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Spirit oh spirit Come back to me Who said You could fly off free? Left me alone Cold, and bared to all What you left is a shell Washed up on a shore. Are you flying free In some paradise? Or are you busy somewhere Scurrying like mice? Oh spirit, my friend, You are me, and I you Two, but one, together Shining a brilliant hue. Without you, no delights No life, like death My soul, my spirit You are gone, I am bereft. |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Very beautiful, very serene. Lovely!  |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Good work! Liked this one very much. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road |
'Lovely poem. Without spirit we are stone... Ällän |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
To remember to celebrate our sprits, very nicely written!!! Very inspiring |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Yet another beautiful poem, tara. And terribly sad. *sniff* I have been missing you, by the way.  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
Beautiful - and be not bereft - thy spirit shall fly back to thee! Deepak |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Your spirit is there, it will never completely desert you..(maybe it is on a little vacation..) Take care "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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