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Dark Poetry #2

Trying once more

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2000-07-07 01:44 AM

Tiger is clawing,
At my winged soul,
Tearing it apart by its hatred,
Each passing moment takes away my liberty,
My liberty to sore about the great blue sky,
As I soar higher and higher,
The jerk of the tiger never stops,
Confrontation is impossible,
Pulling me toward the earth by its loathsome claws,
Roaring in pain I try once more,
Final aspiration of soaring with my winged soul.

Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create).

Wren
Member

since 2000-07-05

Posts 312

1 posted 2000-07-07 10:40 AM

This is really good! nice images!

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

2 posted 2000-07-07 11:13 AM

This is awesome!

I love how you have used the two unique animals here. It really puts so many flashing images in your mind as you read... well done!

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