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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
everytime he blinks revelations are born from the blood of his eyes negitive zeros i remember flouresent lights and the birth of venus I wait at the bottem of the sea Dreaming cornea dreams |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Hey Negitive Zero, When I read it, it left me speechless. I liked it very much but I would like to know how did you come to wright that. What ispired you is what I am asking. -Neala (Goddess of Sadness) |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Neala (Godess of Sadness)- Thank you very much! I appreciate your compliment! I was inspired by a dream I had recently, of being inside someone's eye! (weird,I know!)  I'm so glad you liked it becase this is my first poem posted here and I'm kind of new at this!Wren |
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redheart angrybraids Member
since 2000-04-16
Posts 410honolulu, hawaii |
i really enjoyed your poem, i love the words you chose, at first i thought you were my sister, because her name is also Wren, any ways love your work, Kindly, Redheart Angrybraids |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Dreamy poems are awesome,...like this one. I find them sooo interesting and if you (the speaker) look deep enough into it yourself you may find some strange way in which it relates to or symbolizes something that's going on in your life. Who knows,...usually does for me. Great work. *Peace. *BTW,...Welcome here!!!  .[This message has been edited by SpitFire (edited 07-05-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Welcome to Dark Passions, Wren. From this poem I believe you will fit in nicely. Hardrock |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Welcome Wren!! What a great first post. Intriguing actually. I too sense you'll be right at home here in the dark forum I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions Wren! Great first post !!!Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
This is a brilliant poem. I thought it was about someone who had gone mad, or could see things the rest of us couldn't. and Welcome Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Thank you all very much! Wren |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Wren...nice one and welcome to Dark Passions. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
welcome to the darkside and wonderful first post. do keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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