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Decay your Forte
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Decay your Forte |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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heart-spilled love splatters seeping into concrete mass soaking, spreading forming branches of emotions leaked sun-dried it becomes tainted bait for flies a feast, a bloodied smorgasbord beware! little flies for this love… it is stale, unworthy of your appetite why do your feelers touch here? Oh forgive me decay.... your forte Angel of Darkness July 2000 It's been too many nights of being with to now be suddenly without "Jewel" |
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Wren Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 312 |
Wow. It gave me shivers reading it! Wow. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I really, really enjoy reading your work. There's something so pleasing about the style and the way that it's dark yet it reads so softly to me. Anyway,...thanks for sharing your words. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Nice imagery here...well done. Hardrock |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Great decadent imagery! An impressive piece. Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, chills on this reading. Great piece. Catalinamoon "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
decay your forte well said. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Good dark images....descriptive. Good one. Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings: it takes its origin from emotion recollected in tranquility. -William Wordsworth- |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
something not good enough for flies. that something i don't think anyone deserves. wonderful read enjoyed the sort of story in it and its vivid point on fate. thanks for posting and shareing it with us. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all for reading this and your lovely replies, I do appreciate them so  Yes, I am here, but I am dead, not alive, my body goes on, my spirit has died and I though alive, feel dead inside. "Rose Petal" |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
just going through some of your older stuff and noticed a lot of folks had never seen this one. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Yeah - like me...shockingly... wow. Dark was a good place to put this B Roo K |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I knew I was in for a treat just by the title here. I love your style of writing. Michael |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
wow.....i too missed this one,since i've been gone for a year. Very very good writing. The verse that slapped me in the face was "soaking, spreading forming branches of emotions leaked" that is SO descriptive!! esp. the branches,it's wonderful the way you bring in the smallest most ignored details. great work swamp "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Jamie you're a sweetie, thank you so much for bumping this one to the top, sheeesh, did you have fun removng the cob webs?Thank you my dear Hey Tigger, yeah it had to go into Dark , thanks hon. Michael, that is such a compliment, thank you Swamp¤Faeryie, Thank you for your most lovely reply I am glad you enjoyed it Thank you all Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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