»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #2
»
Me
| Dark Poetry #2 |
|
Me |
|
|
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
|
Who Am I? Lost in a world all of my own. Different from anyone else, in a way unknown. What is my purpose for being? Why am I still here? My life is nothing but torture, a world filled completely of fear. Few reasons left for living, but at least they keep me alive, if I never had them here, how could I possibly survive? Attempts toward death, but in one last second, thoughts of those I might of left. Surrounded by darkness, living life blind. Can't get rid of the past, that should've been left behind. So who am I, & why am I here? Please show me the way, & make my life clear! |
||
| © Copyright 2000 ¢¾ KT ¢¾ - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Oh always look...there is something to go on for!! That was very well written but touched my heart, so sad. I hope your doing ok!! |
||
|
Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the Passions Family! I've enjoyed reading some of the poetry you posted here today and have even looked at your website. Please check your email for a special message. (As a quick note, it's better to spread out posting your poetry over a few days..so many posted at once may not get the attention they deserve! Thanks!) |
||
|
Bustem57 Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 98 |
Very well written!! Each one of us at one time has those thoughts.Well done!! |
||
|
Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Ditto to what Bustem57 said. Well done. Hardrock |
||
|
SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Welcome here!!! Great writing here with your first post. Glad you came, hope you stay. Take care of you. *Peace. |
||
|
Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Oh hon wish someone could show you lead you, but unfortuneatly you have to do it yourself. The road is rough but worth the hike and the experience. Great work.  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
||
|
Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
yes i have been where you are before and its hard and soon hope your clear from the storm i live my life on the line between darkness and light. and if you can't get all the way to the light i'll lend you a hand and you can live here with me if you like. i loved your poem very much. and welcome to the darkside. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
||
|
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
thanx every1 i really feel welcomed here & thats a nice change |
||
kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
though i never contemplated committing suicide, i have had those intimidating moments of self-doubt before... well, i use the Prayer Of Serenity to guide me through life and i hope this prayer will be of some help to you May God grant me the serenity to accept things i cannot change, the courage to change things i can and the wisdom to know the difference wishing you luck  |
||
|
ZuMBLe Junior Member
since 2000-03-27
Posts 33 |
Wow, great poem. I know partially why you are here.. To write great poetry and touch other people's lives.. =) Zum |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
