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The fight |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
From light Of Day to Gloom of night This heart Of mine has To fight To say alive So i strive To lock the Demons outside To teach lessons that Need to be taught And Fight the fights that Need To be fought. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Great poem Jeremiah  Speaks volumes... did you write this recently? Great read! |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Another excellent poem from you. Sums up life in a nutshell! Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Its so true. I wish you had a happier world. Catalinamoon |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Allright Jeremiah...out of sight, really, REALLY liked this one!!! Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~You should have a little book of all of these short yet Soooo packed full of meaning poems!!! I mean it. They, including this one are great. Take care. *Peace. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Jeremiah....I agree with SpitFire...I hope you are keeping all of these and filing them away for a published book someday. I love your youthful insight into life and it's foibles. Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Well spoken Jeremiah, how I wish sometimes I could sum things up in few words and have them speak volumes, Very well done!! |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jeremiah I agree! Start a little book of quotes Great stuff which lately doesn't surprise me coming from you I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Hey Jeremiah, I'm registered now, but can't post anything, I'm not allowed. Your poetry is insightful. Lovin' it. I want to read some of that new "happy" stuff you said you've started to write now. I bet it's beautiful. Jenn |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Keep on fighting my friend. I am with you all the way. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I voted for you...! |
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Cyndey Member
since 2000-05-18
Posts 84Arkansas |
Great poem Jeremiah!  Cyndey "All that we see or seem, Is but a dream within a dream" Edgar Allan Poe |
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sash Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 125 |
Way to go Jeremiah! I really enjoyed it! Take care. ~Sash~ |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
hey great poem !! LOVE ELMO |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
A little late getting in here and not much left to say beyond all the comments made so far, except to agree. Great job. jwesley |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
such words of wisdom for us all....dont give up...fight fight fight |
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