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Walter Poe Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787 |
The flash bang .The Bright Light ..The Parcels Gold ...The Joy Untold ....The happy songs .....The Day Prolonged ......A Birthday treat .......A pile of sweets ........The adults grown .........The childs sweet smile ..........Its always in the potentia ...........The happy day replayed over ............Repetition through eons .............Another year dies ..............Another celebration, a high ...............Untill next year SUPRISE Vanguard of the New Movement Behind his polished cedar desk, surrounded by his phones, Sits Blazer Dyke(The yachting type), The vanguard of the clones. The Archetype, The number one,The vanguard of the clones. Crossing over busy street, where noisy traffic drones, Walks Blazer Dyke (without a bike), The vanguard of the clones. The autocrat, The ectomorph, The vanguard of the clones. He strides across the cobbled yard, Where pawn shops offer loans, That Blazer Dyke (Whom i dislike), The vanguard of the clones. The cannibal, The parasite, The vanguard of the clones. He passes through the wicket gate, To churhyards full of bones, That Blazer Dyke (on a midnight hike), The vanguard of the clones. The necrophile, The narcissist, The coprophage, The sybarite, The telepath, The Anti-Christ, The vanguard of the clones. Robert Rankin (The Dance of the Voodoo Handbag) |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Walter...you and CatalinaMoon are on a holiday theme. Excellent...well done. Hardrock |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool walter... love the format and presentation of this... enjoyed the upbeat flow of it.. was it my fav dark poets b-day?  great writing... take care jm What the caterpillar calls the end ... The world calls a butterfly ~LaoTzeTao~ ~Butterflies are meant to be free~ |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I liked this one. It sums up the happy child's birthday inanutshell. These lines give it the dark spice: The happy day replayed over Repetition through eons Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
I liked this one. It sums up the happy child's birthday inanutshell. These lines give it the dark spice: The happy day replayed over Repetition through eons Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice format, and wow, someone had a nice birthday, at least one, somewhere in the memory..Loved it. "If a man moves you to feel like a woman, the least you can do is let him." Merrit Malloy |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
enjoyed this one much i do like it alot. and yes the theme is very good glad to see you were happy. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Very neat posting here. Glad I got to read it. Thank ya. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Birthdays have always been and will always be special to me. It is sad for those who lose the ability to believe in a little magic. Glad you haven't and I'd have been surprised if you had!! We only get a couple of special days a year, we should always make the most of them  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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