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Wasted DreamZ |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio 
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hi yall well it has been awhile since i wrote. and this one comes stright from my soul. its a true story. infact it just happened tonight. i wish it didnt happen. this is one sad poet. =( tell me what yall think. Wasted DreamZ Wasted dreams and memories Never to come true All my dreams where shatterad one night The night i broke up with you I gave you my heart To hold and to keep But that night you broke it in 2 Now all i do is weep You say that you still love me And that you always will The moment i heard those words it was like time stood still You said that things have changed And that we should just be friends You said our once great love Should come to a painful end i left your arms 4 months ago but how was i to tell that my life would go from absolute heaven to depths of a firery hell you say that you have found a new since i went away if i would have never left it wouldnt be this way if i was there i could be in your arms where you could hold me all night and protect me from harm but now all i hold is my pillow and lay at night and cry sometimes i wonder why the hell i even try cuz no matter what i do i get hurt in the end my heart has a hole so big that no one can mend i wanted to marry you and give myself to you for life i wanted to be your husbabd and i wanted you to be my loving wife i wanted to be together for all eternity i wanted to grow old with you and have a loving family but all my hopes came crashing down right before my eyes sending my life into a tailspin into a spiriling demise i dont know what to do anymore the pains to much to bare for in my heart the name wanda will be etched forever there i wish you the best of luck in everything you do and you will always have this little angel watching over you remember i will always love you untill the very end and no matter what you say we are always more then friends you will forever have my heart wanda i hope that you can see that i will always be your night angel and you will always be my little chickadee i wish i could turn back time so i wouldnt have left you that night back to when my dreams were within my sights i will always love you forever but now i sit here and cry cuz i mean nothing to you and i dont know why now i am off to sleep to dream of you my dear cuz this is the only place that i can ever again hold you near alone in a fake happiness its not all as it seems just another broken hearted person and his wasted dreamz... Jesse C. Jaymz Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Sooo sad, Jesse, it almost made me cry. I'm sorry you had such an unhappy experience, lost love is always terrible. But remember that it's better to break up like this (she still cares for you) than in a fight, and at least she was honest and told you about it. And don't give up hope, you never know who you will meet tomorrow! BTW, I *love* the hat!  Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Hi Jesse, Im very sorry for your pain, but never say never, so many times I thought it was the "end" and we worked things out, I'll be hoping for you!!! Hope your sadness is replaced by happiness very soon. I loved the poem, and wish you well!!1 |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Jesse hon, your big sissy is very proud of you, this is by far the best poem you have ever written!! I know your pain, hurt and confusion hon, but time does heal all wounds, you knew it was over, just hearing she had another was a stumble that is all. I believe in you and know you have the will to get over this. *hugs* Talk to you soon. Isis I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
so very sad i feel your pain the same thing has happened to me but in a different way but thats another story. this one is about you. i've never in my life found anyone to care about me until i found this place and now many people do and i know they to care about you. hope that you get your dreams back and everything works out for you. keep up the good work. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
hi again thanks for all the great feedback and support. it means alot. right now i am so messed up and sad. and this really made my day. it made the broken angel feel better again. ya know i was gonna marry this person. then she does this. sometimes your the windshild, sometimes your the bug, sometimes it all comes together, sometimes you losing love. i guess its just another loss. sis, thank you so much. i just want to thank you publicly for everything you have done for me. you really helped me alot. and you truly are my big sis. *hugs* lotharingia, thank you for loving my hat to i am a cowboy, hehehehehe. thanks again yall.Do you bury me when I’m gone? Do you teach me while I’m here? Just as soon as I belong, Then it’s time I disappear... MetallicA "I disappear" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
No thanks necessary hon *hugs* I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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