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Living in my Dream World.. |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas 
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I sit in the corner Waiting for you But what am I waiting for? Is it love so true? Yet another day goes by Another lonely night Living in my dreams With nothing more in sight Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Even though a short poem, it says much... well written  |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
OK, DkW...out of that corner, onto the floor. Come dance with me. Don't hide your love in darkness....Hardrock (oh yeah, loved the poem....) |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
oh Hardrock I wish it was that easy to come outta the darkness to dance. Lend me a hand? Peace Once there was a darkness Deep and endless night You gave me everything you had Ahhhhhh you gave me light |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Good question, "What am I waiting for?" I ask the same thing. Very to the point.. |
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Rex Member
since 2000-06-29
Posts 482Houston, Texas |
Very nice, but very sad. "Looking to the future we envisage the towering peaks of our dreams; the golden valleys of opportunity and fullfillment. Dwelling on the past we dip into the dark well of memories to drink deep of regret and failure. In the trice we taste of the eolian vicissitudes of living. Never lose the vision of your dreams...lest they haunt all your yesterdays!" ...Rex... Life be not God's greatest gift. Of what worth be life without the capability to love? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh* I am here....sadly a lot of us are or have been... good poem.  |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
enjoyed the read. i like your work very much and love it all as well. so do keep the coming and say out of that corner cause it can get cramped. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
DKW, how sad. I'm sure someone will come by your corner sooner or later! (I like corners, too, they're kind of cosy!) Lotharingia "For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?" Tom Holland |
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Lonelypoet Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 123Conklin,NY,USA |
Dark_kisses, And I thought your journey was going well.. I hope this fellow realizes your love and sees what he's missing Another great poem! |
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