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Forever On
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Timothy R Cox New Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 5Wheatland WY USA |
Forever On A dream of you and I dancing In the rain along side a road Rubber necked drivers race on by Oblivious to their presence we are The breeze gently caressing your silky locks Your smile seems to warm the rain chilled air I dance on hoping that it will never end For the want and desireenvelopes my heart As you are the I wish to have Alas as the song comes to it's end Together we stand as two Yet you the angel of my dreams Will dance as one forever on.... |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
well i voted for this one thanks for posting it and this is the first of yours poems i have read so welcome and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
This is fantastic!  Put a smile on my face it was so good! How lovely it would be to dance in the rain, regardless of what others may think |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Time...great job. I could see the two of you dancing.....and I remembered when I too danced in the rain beside the road. Hardrock |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Yes to dance in the rain with the one you love is great. To dance alone is a sin. Great poem kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Timothy R Cox New Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 5Wheatland WY USA |
thank you all for your kind words.... |
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