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Trisha4_u Junior Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 28 |
East Coast I reflect upon yesterdays Wishing they were tomorrows, Thinking of the pain endured And the heart-felt sorrows. I dream of the smiles That I once knew, And how alive I felt When I was with you. I remember so many tears Spilled from our eyes, Both of sadness and joy And how we both realized. Doubt was not an option For then we knew it was real, But time took its toll Leaving wounds unhealed. I close my eyes tightly Once again I am there, Held securely in your arms Living without a care. A smile sneaks across This aged weary face, For what once was had Can never be replaced. Indeed at times now It all comes back to me, Every curve and detail Of us I can see. Once I gave my heart away And forever it was lost, In and endless line of emotion Incessantly tossed. My tomorrows now are uncertain Sometimes I feel so alone, Seeing how far apart Two hearts now have grown. I must be a traveler Because I continue on, Facing all that confronts me Whether it is right or it be wrong. Know this you I speak That I WILL be okay, No matter what pain I endure I will find a way. I love my yesterdays For which I wish I could borrow, But I must now live for today In order to await my tomorrow. Jeremy T. Sellers 6/12/00 2:00 PM ~~~~~~~ I have a dear friend who has doesn't realize his own talent. He teases me about being his "Agent". Well as his Agent my wish is for him is to have a dream come true. *East Coast was written in ten minutes*. "Here you go Sir Jeremy!" Trisha4_u aka Lady RED. |
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Trisha4_u Junior Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 28 |
ps: I do not own the copy rights to this poem..only Jeremy Sellers does.  ! |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
you definitely have the eye. he is truly talented. what a rhythym he has and a grasp on vocabulary to say it in so many ways, but it all equals pain and how he maintains.... !! excellent work!! thank you for going out on a limb in the name of your friend!! kynder The years teach much which the days never know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Trisha, indeed I owe you a lot for this. It was so wierd to see my work posted and know I had not put it there. Made me feel all warm inside. However, if I follow the advice of Mr. Carnell, I shouldn't submit too many works too soon. So you are officially my agent. Kynder, thank you for your nice words. It's time to see if my high school teachers and college professors knew what they were talking about Jeremy |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi Trisha , It was an heartfelt poem by Jeremy..good one to read. Sincerely A_L |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Trisha, indded you make a wonderful agent!! Jeremy this is great, you have a gift, and glad to see you have joined us here in Passions, WELCOME!!! I like this style and how you started out melancholy and ended with hope that is what poetry and life is all about!! Great stuff...  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
Excellent writing. This piece tells me I have something to look forward to, instead of just living in the past. Hopefully if I can be strong the future will take care of itself. But for now I feel more comfortable in the darkness. (At least now I know were I am and have been and am searching within myself to work these feelings out) "Long Live Dark Passions" |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Very well put! good job "J" Thanks trish..... Click |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Trish, thank you for the insight on Jeremy's behave. and yes Jeremy you do have a talent, very good. a great HHHHHHHOOOOOOOWWWWWWWLLLLLLLLLing review. Oh and yes welcome to passions. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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just_another_fe Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483MICHIGAN |
I LOVE this! |
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