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DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

0 posted 2000-10-11 10:39 AM

Forgive my tears,
they just tend to fall,
sometimes with reason,
sometimes with none at all.

Forgive my lies,
I ment to hurt none,
I just wanted all the drama
to be over and done.

Forgive my self-pity,
it tends to make me feel o.k.,
I know its a bother,
but thats just my way.

Forgive me for all my sins,
and all the misery that hangs around,
Forgive me for all my anger,
and crap I leave around.

EVEN ANGELS FALL.

CrEaTuRe
Member

since 2000-01-01

Posts 260
Kuala Lumpur,Malaysia

1 posted 2000-10-11 11:12 AM

I guess i really can relate to this one dearie ... it's a great piece of work

forgiveness if one of the virtue in life that is really needed for survival

I just wished some people learn the way to forgive ....

Love CoMeS To ThOsE WhO Still HoPe AlThOuGh They've BeeN DiSaPpOiNteD,To ThOsE WhO StiLL BeLiEvE AlThOuGh ThEy'Ve BeeN BeTraYeD,LoVe KeEpS ThEm GoInG

Lady Lost
Member

since 2000-07-13

Posts 470

2 posted 2000-10-12 02:26 PM

I find that the hardest form of forgiveness is that of forgiving yourself.....great piece....beth

"And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..."
- REA

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

3 posted 2000-10-12 05:57 PM

I'm not trying to degrade here, but this is the way I felt much through my high school years. I liked reading this very much. It was like going back in time for me, and when I think about it, much of this mood still remains with me. Great work. I am looking forward to reading more.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

4 posted 2000-11-08 09:01 PM

yes please forgive me as well. for i relate and often my replies say nothing of what i read.. just what is in my head. i love this poem!! so true, so real, so raw. very very good. you are a natural. keep it up!!

kynder

"Full is not heavy as
empty, not nearly, my love,
not nearly...."

Fiona Apple

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2000-11-09 05:50 AM

Excellent!

Could relate to this. Take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

6 posted 2000-11-09 10:33 PM

I related to this to a T. This was great!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

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