Dark Poetry #2 |
The Little Old Man " A True Story |
Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
He shuffles in the store one day His shaky hands inside His plastic baggie, filled with coins.. His Fear he cannot hide. His face lost in confusion Afraid to ask the clerk If she has those "dollar" cigarettes Can she make his money work No she says abruptly There's nothing here for you Come back with some more money There's nothing I can do A man nearby, who waits his turn Witnesses this act In that split second He steps out of line And says "I'll be right back" He follows this man and once caught up Places his hand upon his arm He turns to him Looks in is eyes There is no cause for alarm Here my friend he speaks To him.. Compassion shining through Reaching in his pocket Saying this is what I'll do You take this money Go back inside And buy your "special brand" This little old man was trembling As he placed it in his hand We drove away while watching.. He proudly made his way Clutching tight his bag of coins A stranger had changed his day. It was My Husband that did this random act of kindness. |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I know cigarettes are bad for us but this little man was lost and Im glad he was able to get some help that day. |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Deborah...we ALL should do as your husband. A random act of kindness, everyday. Start a RAK movement today. It may be nothing more than saying to someone, "You have the brightest smile.." One never knows when just one kind word or deed may be the one that gives another person the strength to go on just one more day. Give your hubby a hug and tell him it's from the Hardrock. (Yeah, I said hug him....any of youse guys tink dat's funny, me and Mr. Louieville slugger will be waitin out back for youse) |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
i very kind man your husband we need him were i live cause there are alot of poor people here that get looked down apon maybe he could set an example who knows. i try but people don't seem to listen to a kid.oooohhh well i guess thats how life goes. enjoyed the read very much. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awww Deborah, this was just beautiful Human kindness means so much in this world... a wonderful husband you have |
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demoninlove Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 211Dehradun |
A lovely poem and wonderful words! I notice you gave the words "my husband" capital letters "My Husband" which he rightly and richly deserves!! Deepak Menon |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
Thanks everyone and Hardrock I hugged him that day and gave him one for you last night too!!! |
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