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Dark Poetry #2

Finale

Rex
Member

since 2000-06-29

Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-06-29 03:04 PM

               Do not come again.
                I could not bear
                 To see my face
             Reflected in your eyes...
                 Bereft of that
              Which might have been.

DJLI
Member

since 2000-06-21

Posts 237
TN, USA

1 posted 2000-06-29 11:11 PM

beautiful...this is really well written...keep up the work

-if you don't like the message, don't kill the messenger.-

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

2 posted 2000-06-29 11:31 PM

Rex, very to the point, but you can learn to look straight through someones eyes, I loved it.

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

3 posted 2000-06-30 01:20 AM

i think this is why you can't really be friends with someone after you break up cause you always look for what could have been great poem i love it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

4 posted 2000-06-30 08:49 AM

I love the reflective imagery in your poetry! But you can be friends with someone who you loved. It just takes time. (of course it doesn't always work, depends upon the people involved. But life is never so simple that you can say it's always like this or like that. Sorry, I'm rambling!)

Lotharingia
"For God's sake, he's a poet. Poets are meant to feel miserable. Otherwise, what the hell are they here for? What are they going to write about?"
Tom Holland

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