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Dark Poetry #2

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jennie may*
Member

since 2000-06-17

Posts 122

0 posted 2000-06-28 02:44 PM

our love
is a
wasteland
of
promises in vain

of past
of present
of future
nothing

rotting quietly
in my palms

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

1 posted 2000-06-28 03:18 PM

"rotting quietly
in my palms"
Liked how u described this!

Joy

kynder
Senior Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 537
Tallahassee, Florida

2 posted 2000-06-28 05:09 PM

this is excellent jenniemay. very powerful. i love poems that say alot in very few words.

kynder

Across the gateway of my heart,
I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!"
But love came laughing by and
Cried "I enter everywhere!!!"

Herbert Shipman

LuckyinLove
Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 57
Australia

3 posted 2000-06-28 09:29 PM

OOUU! there are so many different loves out there I think I might give the thought of love away for awhile, You know what they say when your not looking you'll find it. he he

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

4 posted 2000-06-28 09:57 PM

Excellent....few words, great meaning.....Hardrock

Jeremiah Johnson
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

5 posted 2000-06-29 11:04 PM

truely a great poem. keep it up. and just to let you know i voted.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

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