Dark Poetry #2 |
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Allstaria22 Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 83MN USA |
I killed her today with my hands covered with blood as I looked at all she had made me of everything she had taken I'm glad she's gone I shall not mourn she was no good she broke my heart she took my life with all her lies she took you away from me with her stupid thoughts of a perfect love that doesn't exist that will never be hers or mine it is never to be that we shall feel the lover's touch upon our flesh makeing us feel everything we've ever wanted everything I've ever needed I'll never get to now I killed her I killed me she will not be missed no one knew her but me and I am gone now too. [This message has been edited by Allstaria22 (edited 06-27-2000).] |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
"....no one knew her but me, I killed her, I killed me" Sometimes you have to do that, figuratively speaking of course....kill off what we can no longer tolerate, so new life can emerge. Hope you find that love that gives you new life. Powerful poem....Hardrock |
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Deborah1 Senior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 653New Hampshire |
I think we truly can put closure to things (with thoughts) somehow we all have many ideas to help us put an end to painful memories, I hope true Love finds you, I agree with Hardrock, very powerful Deborah 1 |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Powerful indeed......I like this very much and the way the your imagery jumps out of the words! "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great poem and yes sometimes we have to do these things to start over. enjoyed the read and keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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