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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland 
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Soemthing more dark just for Joel.. LOL Damn you and your fruitless dreams, They never become reality, There is more to life than pipe dreams, You have to face your emotional fragility. Damn war, such a waste of time, Neither side ever wins, We merely count the dead and wounded, And soon forget them and all they contributed. Damn the smartasses in this world, Who believe they know it all, Just once I'd like to be there, And applaud loudly as I watch them fall. Damn illness the dark constrictor in life, Damn him for taking the innocent, Why not take those old and beyond their time, Instead of innocents or children just at their prime. Damn so damned much, Why is life this way? Why for every moment of happiness, Do we eventually have to pay?? |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Ah Isis,...this is DAMN good. Really. I often think these very things. Why, why, why, why, why???? aaaggghhh!!! I hear every word you said. Great poem. Take care. *Peace. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Nothing much really.. hard to write dark when you don't feel it  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Well I am very glad to hear that you don't feel dark. That is wonderful....really. Yiipppeee. I still liked the poem though...no matter what you come back and say...  haha. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Isis, I liked this too. I am always in a semi dark place myself. It's good that you aren't. |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
Well thank you , hahaha. great poem kid. now that's more like it. all this rainbow damn things are getting me sick. hahahaha not really. Isis, you really know how to put your point across, and if you don't feel dark ?? then fight a damn rainbow I'll grab the pot of gold. hahaha love it kid. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is really good. i like how you keep asking the same question Why over and over i think it really adds to the point of this one. great job. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Straight forward and to the point Isis. . . Says it all. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
it must be hard to read darkness and not feel it, isis. that only proves what a DAMN good poet you are!!!!!!! to be able to write it, and exceptionally well at that. kynder Across the gateway of my heart, I wrote "No Thoroughfare!!" But love came laughing by and Cried "I enter everywhere!!!" Herbert Shipman |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Damn! I'm glad you all liked my little rhyme about nothing much!! HAHA I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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E. Benjamin Roy Junior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 12 |
Fine peice of work....that's all that needs to be said, other than DAMN!! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Damn i'd like to write a poem titled "Damn" but you beat me to it...perhaps "Damn it" or "Damn it all to Hell" ....ha...ha... You poem was kindof cool. Reminds me of some of the famous damn's. Remember the song "DAMN I wish I was yuor lover" sung by sophie b. hawkins? Or how about "Frankly Martha I don't give a Damn." spoken by Clark Gable in "Gone With the Wind?". I did write a poem called "The Blues". James |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
James, love Sophie's song alright! I sing it often, it's in my repoitaire Thanks for reading I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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