Dark Poetry #2 |
Etheral Choices of Multiple meaning |
Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Gazing upon the absence of light observing a world traveling to the edge, She dresses in fragile minds granting endless time the process of birth, the luxury of plush desires and the adornment of vulnerable smiles In her dreams he dreams, until her fingers find the flesh that creates. He is the King of colors, of images in gold, the essence of verisimilitude He lives only to view glory, this beauty exquisitely made, she, the captivator of polished stones and droplets of zigzag accentuating the art of splendor. In the caress of mid night her body is cashmere rain upon his skin, an etheral stream of deliverance The gods are cruel and twisted like vines of grapes, In their vicious games every night her beauty fades, yet he stays the same As the sun rises, she dies, over and over again Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I liked this it was very good "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very good indeed.... liking a LOT K |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hi hon..glad you are posting..enjoyed very much..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
Ginners, thank you, I really do appreciate your reading and the reply Severn, thank you very much! Victoria, hey, and of course thank you! *S* Z Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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a-alibaster Member
since 2000-01-08
Posts 392 |
Your imagery is absolutally wonderful...thank you for a grand lunchtime read! Until...ali< !signature--> "There is an alter ego which dwells in every soul..." a-alibaster "I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less, I am tears of pain, tears of Death. [This message has been edited by a-alibaster (edited 01-07-2001).] |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
a~Alibaster: thank you for such kind words, I do appreciate them very much! *S* Z Life is an adventure to be experienced |
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