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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Well, someone told me once they never write their stuff down before they write it, which I always do...one of my few attempts at spontaneous prose. Awakened from a wondered dream Where all my fantasies had been seen, To the dark shadows of a lonely night Where in reality nothing has gone right. Pain creeping through my tired veins This dreariness tightening its reigns, Realizing once awake that you are gone Still puzzled as to what went wrong. Reaching for you and calling your name Drifting to sleep I again play the game, Of having you an essential part of me Without you there's no future that I see. I miss your voice and your mezmorizing words It's all so cloudy now and tantilizingly absurd, Reflecting on the plans we had made But I guess I couldn't convince you to stay. Your absence now assualts my brain Abducting all from me that use to be sane, I'll never know your heavenly touch Look you in the eyes and say "I love you so much" Now you're gone and it's drifted away Alone in an arctic darkness with nothing to say, From now I'll question what's said to be true But always know that indeed I love you. Jeremy T. Sellers 1/4/00 12:15 AM "Wait, another minute, can't you see what all this pain, has [profanity edited] done to me, I'm alive, and still kickin' what you see I can't see, and maybe, you'll think before you speak, I'm alive" -Godsmack < !signature--> "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe I edited out the profanity, because if you check the guidelines you'll find it isn't acceptable for the forums. Thankyou, Severn [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 01-05-2001).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Beautiful expressions here! Love when it comes straight from the heart  Into the night I search for you Waiting and wanting To touch you too Forgetting the smiles That you give me each day Or those beautiful words You always say Mags *whispering* I am still here |
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HiddenSparklez Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 190British Columbia, Canada |
"I miss your voice and your mezmorizing words It's all so cloudy now and tantilizingly absurd, Reflecting on the plans we had made But I guess I couldn't convince you to stay" My favorite part of the poem... i could totally feel what you were feeling. =( "You do what you do, you say what you say, you try to be everything to everyone... come on now, do that stupid dance for me" -Everclear |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I love Godsmack, good quote there. I favor spontaneous poetry, I believe it allows you to write straight from the heart and soul, letting out the real emotions that are sometimes stifled down low, and therefore minimized. Enjoyed the read. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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