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Dark Poetry #2

Recipe 3

DreamSeeker
Member

since 2000-11-17

Posts 72

0 posted 2001-01-05 06:23 PM

Create Me
A mountain
of WordSong
lexicon Unseen

From a flash
of inheretant
Paradigms
Enchantment

Stir fry
a Savior
song of Soul
Salvation

in extra Virgin
olive oil
epicureans
savory delight

Vomit out
a government
People
Capable

And oh so willing
to enforce
Pitiless
Conformity

Pass the BeggingBowl
Please

The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

1 posted 2001-01-05 08:21 PM

I dont unerstand your poem or really even like the form of it, but noone else had anything to say so i thought that i would say something.

"I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN
"There is no always forever, just this"-the cure

Dopey Dope

Moderator

Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

2 posted 2001-01-05 08:59 PM

This was great. The title drew me into the poem and the poem was better than i'd thought it'd be. NIce one here.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

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