Dark Poetry #2 |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
...Stunned But not Silent The Mind Trips The Traps Rusty Hinges Bark Impending Pain In their Protests ...Captured By My Own Unremitting Values Of Beliefs Will Out Tainted with Traditional Intrusions ...Destroyed By Contradictions Years of Flight Lives of Sight Blinding Tears Loses the Hold In Seeing A Gasp as Life ...Escapes The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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BitterSmoke Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 54 |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
L I - based on the work I've read I have to say this is the usual profound fare from your pen. And untypoed Me likes...me likes... ...Destroyed By Contradictions Years of Flight Lives of Sight Blinding Tears I've found contradictions can be the biggest traps of all... K |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
...Captured By My Own Unremitting Values Of Beliefs Will Out Tainted with Traditional Intrusions ...Destroyed By Contradictions Years of Flight Lives of Sight Blinding Tears I think we all become trapped by our minds at times, I know I am constantly in and out of mental pen. lol. well written and enjoyed this one a lot. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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