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DreamSeeker
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since 2000-11-17
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0 posted 2001-01-04 09:48 PM


...Stunned
But not Silent
The Mind Trips
The Traps

Rusty Hinges Bark
Impending Pain
In their Protests

...Captured
By My Own
Unremitting Values
Of Beliefs

Will Out
Tainted with Traditional
Intrusions

...Destroyed
By Contradictions
Years of Flight
Lives of Sight Blinding Tears

Loses the Hold
In Seeing
A Gasp as Life
...Escapes




The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise


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BitterSmoke
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since 2001-01-02
Posts 54

1 posted 2001-01-04 10:04 PM



cool

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 2001-01-05 06:46 AM


L I - based on the work I've read I have to say this is the usual profound fare from your pen. And untypoed  

Me likes...me likes...

...Destroyed
By Contradictions
Years of Flight
Lives of Sight Blinding Tears

I've found contradictions can be the biggest traps of all...

K


brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
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ireland
3 posted 2001-01-05 01:53 PM


...Captured
By My Own
Unremitting Values
Of Beliefs

Will Out
Tainted with Traditional
Intrusions

...Destroyed
By Contradictions
Years of Flight
Lives of Sight Blinding Tears


I think we all become trapped by our minds
at times, I know I am constantly in and out of mental pen. lol.  well written and enjoyed this one a lot.


It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

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