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ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

0 posted 2001-01-03 10:01 AM

dungeonous

Blind blackness spiralous fall
in deep and rooted dankest hall
harbors legs of eight and more
their whispering touch against the spores
sends currents sprawling up through the chain
of bony nervous vertebrae

Wetness seeps into your alone
through thickly walls of crumbling stone
putrefied aroma's stank
draws the breath infusing rank
spears of darkened rotting ooze
impaling thoughts of ghostly who's

Locked behind the gates of hell
spun and chained of armored mail
vespers sung in harmony
the song of death and things to be
a prisoner's tune aloud we hear
and tighter still the rungs appear

Limb and bone stretched to alarm
the sounds of tearing ripping harm
with fingers turned and severed clean
with needles burned and driven free
cauterizing fresh the skin
of the alreadydead within

And when this nightmare, an end to it comes
my prisoner's own awakens from
the dream he's had in life sustained
his sickness stays to provide the rains
for growing dead and dying blooms
the blackest rose
of tortured
tombs

m.a. miller
01.02.01

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 01-03-2001).]

a-alibaster
Member

since 2000-01-08

Posts 392

1 posted 2001-01-03 11:01 AM

I am speechless.....this is straight up my alley...SIMPELY AMAZING!!!
until...ali

"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

2 posted 2001-01-03 01:57 PM

Wow,wow,wow,this was excellent,absolutely excellent!! Wow. It was amazing and the feelings it created were just superb. I love the way it crushed my mind and sent me straight to the dungeon. amazing

green eyed monster from the black lagoon

"All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon

ma miller
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 806

3 posted 2001-01-05 09:16 AM

a-alibaster and Swamp¤Faeryie ...

thank you for reading and your kind comments ...

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 01-05-2001).]

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

4 posted 2001-01-05 01:51 PM

this sent shivers down my spine, very dark.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

5 posted 2001-01-05 04:39 PM

Definitely dark...brrrrrrrrrrr...shivers.

K

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