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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2001-01-03 12:44 PM


Fear destroys the mind
doubt prevents the action
anger kills kindness and love
hesitation misses the moment
depression kills the soul
with all of these I stand alone
for they are my jailers
for they are my prison
I am sentenced to death
to rot forever in my tomb of sorrow forever


Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
a-alibaster
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 392

1 posted 2001-01-03 01:05 PM


Sort of reminds me of a poem that I wrote a while ago entitled Sorrow Weeps.
Nice wording here.
Until...ali


"There is an alter ego which
dwells in every soul..."
a-alibaster

"I am as I am, nothing more, nothing less,
I am tears of pain, tears of Death.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2001-01-03 06:35 PM


Fear destroys the mind
doubt prevents the action
anger kills kindness and love
hesitation misses the moment
depression kills the soul
with all of these I stand alone
for they are my jailers
for they are my prison
I am sentenced to death
to rot forever in my tomb of sorrow forever

oh my..some days and  many of them this is me...huggzz..definitely can relate *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
3 posted 2001-01-05 08:09 PM


strongly said! Very well done, a good read.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Deverone
Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136
San Antonio, Tx, USA
4 posted 2001-01-06 07:14 AM


WOW...... I can feel the words and emotions while reading this, as if you knew what I have felt for a long time.

It is good to get those feelings out every once in a while though; they can hurt deeply if you hold on to them too long.



Deverone

"We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out".

--

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