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*prevailing*darkness*
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since 2000-12-18
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Port Richey, FL

0 posted 2001-01-01 11:17 PM


The all embracing touch of love,
how it heals and hurts the soul.
Comforting and tearing,
loving and hating.
Caressing and slapping,
pulling together, pushing apart.
Living in each minute,
dying in each moment.
Loving with each hour,
hating with each day.
Touching you, touching me.
Needing you, needing me.
Rejecting you, rejecting me.
Caressing us:
our faces, our hearts, our souls.
Bruising us:
our faces, our hearts, our souls.
Help us.
Take us away
from this misery
we call love.



*Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.*

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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-01-01 11:51 PM


I really liked this poem--it's excactly how i feel in the relationship im in right now--we are either doing great or hating each other--Love is so weird, great words   LOVE ELMO <3
Sven
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2 posted 2001-01-02 01:00 PM


Ok, now who's reading who's mind??  

This is exactly what I've been feeling. . . thanks for writing it. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


*prevailing*darkness*
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since 2000-12-18
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Port Richey, FL
3 posted 2001-01-02 01:09 PM


Sven... great minds think alike!!  
Thanks!!

*Until you find something worth dying for, you're not really living*


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