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A Dark Day
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A Dark Day |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
'Tis a dark day indeed Beneath the purple skies A dark day indeed For now I realize A dark day indeed No more to see your eyes A dark day indeed As the sun begins to rise 'Tis a dark day indeed I now become aware A dark day indeed No longer do I care A dark day indeed To have you standing there A dark day indeed I feel only despair 'Tis a dark day indeed That makes me wonder why A dark day indeed That brings these tears I cry A dark day indeed In sadness I now sigh A dark day indeed Now prying that I die 'Tis a dark day indeed That blisters me with sin A dark day indeed Because I did not win A dark day indeed No strength left to begin A dark day indeed That hurts so deep within 'Tis a dark day indeed That makes me feel so cold A dark day indeed For the story has been told A dark day indeed No longer am I bold A dark day indeed Alone as I grow old 'Tis a dark day indeed With all these words I say A dark day indeed And the message they convey A dark day indeed My heart it had to pay A dark day indeed When you took my soul away G. A. Webb Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
'Tis a dark day indeed! Great write, excellent flow pattern  You are gifted, my friend! Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This really spoke to me tonight. Thank you. |
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G. A. Webb Member
since 2000-01-21
Posts 441Stanton, California, USA |
Dark_kisses_Within: Hi Mags! Happy New Year!!!  "Gifted"...I don't know about that. I just have a lot of rather unusual thoughts that run through my head from time to time. But thank you so much! I'm glad you liked this piece. I kinda liked it too! Take care Mags! Thank you...I think. It spoke to you? How so, if I may ask? Well, I'm glad you liked it as well. Take care and I wish you all the best in 2001! Regret not that which you have done, Rather that which you haven't |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I know they only took away your soul retorically speaking, but I HAVE to add (you know me) that they can't really take it away emotionally, it is always there, (Maybe quite wounded and needing lots of tlc but always there)... Enjoyed the depth of feeling portrayed here my friend... isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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