Dark Poetry #2 |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
and some would be happy, i suppose, and at least i'm not starving in africa or some other cliche to make myself feel better it's 10:30 on christmas night. 10:46, i guess. i'm rambling, but that's okay, i think, because you know what my rambling is like by now. truth be known, i miss having someone to ramble at, and you're good at listening or good at pretending, i don't know which, but here i am with this addressed to you. yeah. i miss that realness of just saying what you think and i think we should get together and do that but it's hard, you know. i'm growing up too quick. i realized the other day that i don't know if i'm doing this too fast or what i should be doing, but i'm almost twenty-one. last big milestone until i'm thirty five and can run for president. grrr. now i really am rambling, and adding in little animal noises too. and you say "no, i love to get psycho letters from girls i ... whatever" okay, end of ramble (beginning of new ramble?) the whole point was that i miss talking to you. see, i had good intentions. and that's it really. so merry christmas/happy c/hanukah/kwanza/ramadan/seasonal peace celebration love, me |
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*prevailing*darkness* Junior Member
since 2000-12-18
Posts 36Port Richey, FL |
oddly enough, I know how that feels. To love somebody so much, and not know if they are listening and loving or just pretending... it's a hard place to be, but just keep your head up and fight the battle. Very interesting read, I could really relate with this one. *Always do right. This will gratify some people and astonish the rest.* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Loved it... K |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Good one here! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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sonjes Senior Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 564North Carolina |
hmmm...I always thought that I was crazy for doing the things I do I know just how you feel with this one...your writing is very real and down-to-earth. Wonderful! Don't care what people say Just follow your own way Don't give up and use the chance To return to innocence. -Enigma |
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