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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
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Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-12-23 11:46 AM


Pastelle

When sundown's orchid banners fade
And birds wing outward to the sea,
And rising mists, like phantom drapes,
Envelop me...

Then through the far and far away,
As evening's benedictions fall...
Across the silent deep of dusk
I hear your call.

Mute then the birds and seas are stilled,
And the breath of the wind is low...
And only I know the reason why
Of the hush in the afterglow.


© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
1 posted 2000-12-23 04:09 PM


I like this you always write very well, but i liked this more than most of your others, i cant say why, but it was very good
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
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2 posted 2000-12-27 06:46 AM


And only I know the reason why
Of the hush in the afterglow.

I tend to agree...and love  "the silent deep" *s

~Wynter...I think I may be inspired  

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2000-12-27 07:24 PM


This is lovely Rex...so soft, it flows...

definitely inspiring

K

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