Dark Poetry #2 |
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My Final Gift To You... |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia ![]() |
My ignorant inner child Perhaps more blind than naive Choosing not to understand The reasons you wish to leave I've seen fragments of her picture Glimpsed her tender soul The hope that you have given her Mending her spirit whole I've done my best to be angry To feed my jealous heart But what use to grieve your troubled mind I've never had you from the start So, quietly I'll leave you now As a friend that you once knew Who wishes you joy in the love you've found My final gift to you..... Sheila Life is a journey.. not a destination.. - unknown |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Oh wow, Sheila! This was GREAT and very powerful. Walking away is very difficult and yet especially given him to another woman. Excellent final gift to the man you love even though I am sure the pain hurts greatly. Peace, Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
i know this poem all to well. and i think i might have to do the same thing you did. i hope i can find that strenth to move on *hugs* great peace. e-mail me =) love ya jesse Once upon a time there was a light in my life, now theres only love in the dark, There's nothing I can do, a total eclipse of the heart. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow! Excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
I feel like i just stepped into your poem... ![]() Thanks for all of your nice post you have given me...means a lot, Danyel |
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