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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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today sounds the silent call sitting in the emptiness valued not at all graven images mind carved, likeness of happy moments, last visit no words, only thoughts rising to touch the cold name stoned in silent call "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I like this poem very much |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just some sad thoughts today, Ginners..thank you ~Wynter |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
This was somewhat thought-provoking for me... Good work. ~regina. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Regina, just paying a birthday visit to my father...and my moments of thought on this stone cold day...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
don't know exactly what to say to this one,get so tired of using the same ole worn out phrases,but i really liked it regardless. Liked the simplicity and the coolness of it. "All art is an expression of pain."~John Lennon |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
you presented the mood well, with the use of only a few words! good job! *S* Z |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
I've had to read this a few times to try and delve into the meaning.. and I'm still struggling..  , but the words are so very haunting. I especially liked the ending.."words, only thoughts rising to touch the cold name stoned in silent call" Very thought provoking, I must say! Sheila |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Swamp¤Faeryie- these were haikus or senryus (5-7-5 syllable lines)depending on whether you took them as nature or otherwise..it is my father's birthday today and I was thinking about my visit to the cemetery..thus the coldness and the stone..and the silent call to me...besides being on frozen ground...thank you for reading and responding. ~Wynter Z...well you know how these visits go...you can't really be happy about them and even less so at this time in my life..thank you dear one huggzz ~Wynter Sheila- had sort of a double meaning here...but for me to know and really no one else...thanks for trying though ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wynter, have you been reading Shakespeare. you know "Now is the winter of my regret, of passions unfelt and persons unmet,the losses and scars pile on my heart,when will I new living to start." Loved your Haikus, so cool, so cold. *HuGS* Write on, be strong Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Short and sad  i enjoyed it...and Hugs to you on this hard dayDanyel |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kethry , no I haven't been reading any Shakespeare but I thank you for those lines... they are very meaningful hugggzz Danyel thank you I appreciate your kind words huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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