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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest 
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Oooooooo.... you ladies man...... Having a problem handlin the cram? You know the one I mean Those emails that reach out and scream! The ones you can't remember [Profanity edited], they've been there since September! You have forgotten to those which YOU have replied Just let them sit in the folder marked, "DENIED"! I know all to well of the last one I elude too!!! See, I am there amongst that dead pile of doo doo!!!!!! I must of lost your interest???? I know YOUR type Only the best! Not a problem you see....... Just wanted to send you a ~~~teehee~~~ Mess with your HUGE ego, MY DEAR! No need to respond to someone, unless sincere! So, I thought I would let YOU know I gave up on YOU a LONG time ago! I enjoy your electric poetry along with the rest For *your* CHARM, well..it is amongst the best! BUT, don't call on THIS lady as YOU think you may For she has went far..... far away.... Far away in her soul & heart A place to where she will never part YOU were once a nice thought indeed A promise, of an untainted seed The one she prayed would grow But instead, found a severe and ........ *unusual strange undertow* Illusion...I edited out your profanity in accordance with Passions guidelines. Thanks Kamla. [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-22-2000).] |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Hon this is so heartfelt. Internet romances are such a dangerous thing, so many times people get hurt, only the rare and I mean RARE few ever really make it. So sorry for you but take a little advice don't mourn him over Christmas instead look on this Christmas as 'New Beginnings'. *hugs* Merry Christmas Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Hmmmmmmmm.... I like the attitude of this one!  Very well said! This kind of stoked some coals.. though, I'm not sure if I'm angrier at the one who does not live up to what he makes himself to be.. or the one who believe's him. Either way.. these internet games can be hell! I think you've got the right idea!! Great write!Sheila |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
This was a good one! I think everyone has fell under those internet games  I love the attitude in this one too*S* Danyel....* |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
This was good, 2 1/2 years i spent in a relationship that statted on the internet and then moved to somewhere else-my bed- then i was thrown away. very good poem "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I can only echo whats been said already. Sadly ths happens all too often. I like the way you have expressed this, Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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