Dark Poetry #2 |
My Angel |
SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"My Angel" You're off in some far away place I see a glimpse of your loving face And the way your wings float so full of grace You're my angel and noone can take your place Sitting on a cloud your caring ways And lovely face attract a crowd You're hair gleams like spun gold against the sun Your personality was truley fun I love you so much my angel So much I cannot express except to say You were, are, and always will be the absolute best My words are heart-felt my angel And I also know that you've always been heaven sent By: Lisa Kennedy Dedicated to my mom (whom passed away when I was 12) ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Precious words for your angel mom...James |
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firecrakker Member
since 2000-10-20
Posts 235Virginia |
Lisa, I'm sorry that you had to lose someone so special at such a young age.. but you have a very beautiful way of remembering her.. Sheila |
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bluebrdy65 Member
since 2000-05-16
Posts 276Gladys, |
Beautiful poem Im truely sorry for your loss |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Jmlee12345: Thanks! firecrakker: Thanks for caring. She was beatiful! bluebrdy65: Thanks! Look foward to reading some of your poetry. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
I'd miss eachother too, find the best worst of all and let them know you might not. |
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a_little_girl Member
since 2000-05-08
Posts 307San Alejandro, HI, USA |
I really know kinda what you feel like. I lost my friend about 8 yrs back (I'm 15), and I am still going through the stages. --Lil' Girl PS: Prayers to your mom. |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
carolinadreams: Not sure what you mean by that reply but thanks anyways! ) a_little_girl: Thanks...im sorry about your friend. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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David Generous Junior Member
since 2000-12-15
Posts 13 |
I like the poem, it painted a good picture in my Mind... Sorry about your loss.. Dave |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I lost a friend (3 years on feb 3rd) and this poem reminds me of my own angel, thank you it was very good |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
David Generous: I like your Panhandle. Thanks, I appreciate it. Take care. Ginners: Im sorry about your friend. Thanks for caring. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
This was beautiful poem you wrote..in your mother's memory*S* Wishing you happy Holidays, Danyel |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I feel this even without the loss of my friend. Moving away from my family and friends has created a fealing of such. Maybe not to the extent but somewhat like it. God Bless you and prayers to your mother in heaven There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
MysticWonders: Thanks! Merry Christmas to you also! Take care. baerlon: Thanks. I'm sorry you had a rough move. I like your quote. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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