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To Thine Own Self Be True
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To Thine Own Self Be True |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I wait for the day when he will be mine silently hoping he will leave her in time for it is i he loves and only me he does not love her how could that be i am the one that can see the man in there I am the one he wants Life can be so unfair I Wait patiently for his return and never complain I am always selfless never treat her with disdain For one day he will be mine don't you agree self Mine and only mine I won't be on the back shelf what do you say self what words of wisdom do you speak Don't you have anything to say or are you just to weak "you are to blind"says self "your eyes do not see" "He's not leaving her he is just playin with thee" Do yourself a favor close the damn door Love is so blind and I don't want to see this any more [This message has been edited by Suzanne Arlene (edited 12-16-2000).] |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi Suzanne, If only we "love not with the eyes, but with the mind" ... =) Really diggin' the title ... shakespeare ... i am a big fan ... By the way, this was a great piece of work. It really got me ... esp in the these lines ... 'Do yourself a favor close the damn door Love is so blind and I don't want to see this any more' Cheers! ~verve |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Suzanne Arlene: This poem is so beatifully sad if there is such a thing. You can really feel your pain, I know how it is to love someone when they don't love you back! I like how you quesioned your self in the poem...its easy to belive that something is true if you want it badly enough. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
Thank you so much for your responses. The poem itself was written with a friend of mine in mind not actually myself. I wanted her to question herself.I wanted her to see that loving a married man is sometimes a dead end road. But alas Love is Blind and it does not see everything.And sometimes what we do see we choose to ignore. Thank you again Suzanne |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Suzanne: Your welcome. Also good luck to your friend. That was nice of you to do that for her, but like you said love is blind. Take care. ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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