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A gentle Nudge
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A gentle Nudge |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i'd like to sleep tonight but it's here I must say we lost a war last night yet its here we must say how many times just how many rhymes has this been comfort has it been a loss just how many times have i gotten you lost seeing the hills feeling the valley inside the cave jumping out of falls again i'm wrong tonight what do you feel coming on what do you taste i'd like to sleep but it's here before i go have we looked up yesteryear back now wow, i'm still here, but not at my best maybe the others can fill in the rest i can almost see it now ....,,...Peace, Love, and Happiness Forever J.L. Koehler Please never find an end to this, but try. |
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baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
Sometimes ends are far reaching yet close coming and there is nothing we can do to change it. I liked the read and hope you feel better soon about this matter. There's a peace inside us all Let it be your friend It will help you carry on In the end There's a peace inside us all -Creed |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
enjoyed the read too, hope that when you find the ending that it is a happy one. "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Sweety, and what better time to make a happy ending than Christmas time... *hugs* you're getting a little closer each day... keep going....  Merry Christmas Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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MysticWonders Member
since 2000-12-11
Posts 60Massapequa NY |
Very beautiful..... If you can't be true to yourself...you won't be true to others :( |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am not sure I understand your message but I do feel the anguish in it...huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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