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Xeonox
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0 posted 2000-12-13 01:34 AM


Echoes from the souls,
Bringing my life on hold,

Rage of the past,
Denying my right at last,

Judgment is received,
In turn  I eternally  grieve.



Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)



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Verve
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1 posted 2000-12-13 12:20 PM



This is so Dark ....
Very very nice.
I love it!


~verve

Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-12-13 07:36 PM


Hi Xeonox,

Nice to see you and I find that when things from the past come back and I need to deal with them for some reason I understand them and all of the whys, I hope that you do not grieve to long, this is a powerful post and I think a keeper for me, thank you and hope to see you around.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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