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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
"Sadness" My heart bleeds again The wretching sobs rack my body once again I cry out but am not heard, as i sit here my hearts beating loud enough for everyone to hear I feel as though I'm dead My body lifeless, my troubled head As i lay here and think of you I know I should have knew And the sadness washes over me, the sadness brought by you Thoughts of you which once were sweet make me feel sick with defeat I feel all alone My heart's grown cold And I tell my myself I should have known I must keep the tears inside Of course those I have to hide Is it a sin to love you I wish I knew Mabye then I could get over you At times I feel crazy Because, of the pain and this Reminds me all over how much I love you again I try to keep sane but, at times the pain's so unbearable I just lye there so caught up in my pain Maybe I brought the pain which kills my heart again and again |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
this is very intense and emotion felt.... i read once where some famos poet said,you can't feel the tears in the poem if the tears are not in the writer....i felt your tears. "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lisa~ hi sweets. glad to know this is an old post of yours and that life is much better for you now. i love you! take care hon... ~amy~ |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Zyell: Thanks for caring! I like that quote by the famous poet, I also believe that to be true. Im glad you felt mine although I've found happiness now. Take care. Aimster: I'm glad also that I don't feel as much pain. Thanks for responding to my poem. Take care.  ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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