Dark Poetry #2 |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
i'm a young man but i'm not a dumb man i've been through what most would call i've laughed off and how can i move hey, i've got this problem i always talk about me if you don't relate i am truly SORRY but i'm still a young man i've been told never again i chanced a unified dream kill me if you must slander was their king such blatent reverse of time tested souls i'm a young man why slap my kno..... i'm a new man (profanity edited) you without a chance i'm a young person and i made a call explatives enhance the day can she laugh and prove maybe an ego can be listed and just maybe we can be Peace, Love, and happiness forever J.L Koehler Carolina - Intentionally mispelling swearwords doesn't negate the fact that they are such. I'm sure you're aware they are not tolerated in the forums. Severn [This message has been edited by Severn (edited 12-09-2000).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought the poem was great!......I did, however see that you wrote a bad word in it which is not permitted. The moderators will correct that soon enough, just a little warning before time. Anyway great poem! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them! |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
well now this was very interesting.... waiting to see what's next! *S* Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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