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LM
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since 2000-08-03
Posts 585


0 posted 2000-12-08 03:04 PM



I Still

I come and I go
I hurt and I bleed
And still I am willing
To kiss your feet.

I toss and I turn
I laugh and I cry
And still I would never
Give up a try.

I'm crawling away
And I come running back
Unable to fight coz
It's you that I lack.

I try to break free
But you keep me in chains
And still I do miss you
In a million ways...


"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


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catalinamoon
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
1 posted 2000-12-08 10:43 PM


Hi, I see you are still writing my thoughts. How do you do that? This was great.
Sandra

dragonpoe
Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida
2 posted 2000-12-08 10:48 PM


I liked this very much..

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-12-09 12:12 PM


Oh yea been here many times.  Why is it we always come running back anyways? Hmmmmm food for thought!  

Great read here
Peace,
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


LM
Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585

4 posted 2000-12-09 07:34 AM


Hey guys!
Thanks everyone for replying!

Sandra: I don't know... I guess it's because no matter how different are the situations, feelings are still the same. Everyone can read into it what's closer to his heart.

Dragonpoe: thanks for telling me.

DKW: If I only knew I could solve one of the world's biggest problem  
Thanks for stopping by.

"Most girls want a man with the mean green
Don't wanna dance if he can't be
Everything that I dream up
A man that understands real love"


Verve
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348
Singapore
5 posted 2000-12-09 12:24 PM



Hey LM ...

I gotta say ... I really like this too ... and i agree with them all above!

~verve

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