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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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Late last night I had a plan a new life to begin with dawn the whole thing went away I'm still right where I've been. I still see his face that day he coldly said goodbye I'm not much better than before I've just learned how to lie. Pretending that I'm over it is all that I can do. If only this would make it so I wish this pain was through. Still longing overtakes me when thoughts of him arise. Its not just oh so easy to sever loving ties. Each day is equally as bad as gloomy yesterday I try to hold on to my heart It simply won't obey. Back again my thoughts will rush to feel his heated kiss No matter how I let it go his heart and soul I miss.. |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Your poem is so beautiful, it is strange how beauty rises from ashes. May you find love everlasting. |
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LM Senior Member
since 2000-08-03
Posts 585 |
Ouch...  Sorry you're still hurting... Haven't heard from you in a long time. E-mail me if you can/want. Take Care! Loved this... "Most girls want a man with the mean green Don't wanna dance if he can't be Everything that I dream up A man that understands real love" |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
I love rhyming poetry and this one is great. Very full of emotion. Great job. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Hi ... As always, I enjoyed this work of yours too. Thank you for writing this oh so perfectly ... Very nice work. ~verve |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
In my experience the feelings are not evermore...although while in the mist of it you feel exactly that way...time helps us thru all things and I hope new opportunities find you soon to remind you that love is all around us and happiness can be just around the corner...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
hey girlfriend..nicely written..HOPE You have a great christmas with those cute little grandchildren...hugs.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Zyell Member
since 2000-07-28
Posts 121USA |
I just read were some poet said, to feel the tears in the poem, there must be tears in the poet....i felt your tears.....well done! *S* Z "I am an abstract of Circles" |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Let me guess who you are missing! I loved it, like I do all your work, and I think he still holds your heart and soul like you hold his..... Elise |
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howpeculiar Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 56 |
A reflective and aching piece that struck an almost adolescent chord in me. A rhythmic read. Be well. |
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