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Dark Fingers |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Dark Fingers I can feel them, inching near On my neck and in my hair; I can feel them crawling, Inching, crawling, itching me. Dark fingers of despair reach Through the shadowy breach; I can feel them touching, Crawling, itching, touching me. In my mind, there’s too much And I can’t bare one more touch; I can feel them entering, Coming, crawling, entering me. Daylight hours wan to night Lost within nocturnal fright; Fingers, fingers, Hell’s own hand, Inching, crawling, itching, touching me. Joann Renee' Muszynski 12/07/00 |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
HEY!!! I liked this one! Very Dark and mysterious! Great Job!! Peace Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Swamp¤Faeryie Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393fairyland....of course;) |
i don't know what it's about,but i really liked it. it has marvelous rhythm and the words are all perfectly placed,which is far far beyond me,lol,possibly because i don't really have any idea what i'm doing when writing poetry. but anyhow,very well done =] sam "Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, sounds pretty uncomfortable, great poem though. Sandra |
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