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dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

0 posted 2000-12-07 11:41 AM



Dark Fingers

I can feel them, inching near
On my neck and in my hair;
I can feel them crawling,
Inching, crawling, itching me.

Dark fingers of despair reach
Through the shadowy breach;
I can feel them touching,
Crawling, itching, touching me.

In my mind, there’s too much
And I can’t bare one more touch;
I can feel them entering,
Coming, crawling, entering me.

Daylight hours wan to night
Lost within nocturnal fright;
Fingers, fingers, Hell’s own hand,
Inching, crawling, itching, touching me.

Joann Renee' Muszynski 12/07/00

© Copyright 2000 Joann Renee' Muszynski - All Rights Reserved
Dark_kisses_Within
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since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
1 posted 2000-12-08 12:38 PM


HEY!!! I liked this one!  Very Dark and mysterious!  Great Job!!

Peace
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


Swamp¤Faeryie
Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)
2 posted 2000-12-08 11:46 AM


i don't know what it's about,but i really liked it. it has marvelous rhythm and the words are all perfectly placed,which is far far beyond me,lol,possibly because i don't really have any idea what i'm doing when writing poetry. but anyhow,very well done =]

sam


"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
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The Shores of Alone
3 posted 2000-12-09 09:25 PM


Whew, sounds pretty uncomfortable, great poem though.
Sandra

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