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Candy
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-12-04 07:25 PM


Beautiful things not seen
Just darkness
Nothing in between
It hurts to know your all alone
With no one to call your own
I want to end just to see
How many people will think of me
I'm guessing none
Nobody cares about me now
So how could they when I'm not around
I hate this world
Everybody else has got it good
Why can't I be like everybody else too
Alone I sit in my room
Thinking there's nothing left to do
I will sit here and die slowly
As I think of you

Candy


© Copyright 2000 Candy - All Rights Reserved
Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

1 posted 2000-12-04 09:09 PM


hey Candy...you sound so depressed hon. I know how that feels.

If you need to talk about anything please feel free to email me ok?

K


taramw
Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

2 posted 2000-12-05 08:53 AM


Yeah, I can relate to this sometimes.   Hope you're doing okay.  Take care.
~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish


Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680
Kansas
3 posted 2000-12-05 09:32 AM


Candy,not all of us have it good.  And I really doubt there is a single person out there that has no problems.  I believe just everyone learns to deal with them different ways.  Just dont give up,there's always a brighter side.  
Mags


No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry


breedlove Esq
New Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 4

4 posted 2000-12-05 10:07 AM


it is darkest before the dawn, coldest before the warmth of day.
Candy
Junior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 17

5 posted 2000-12-08 09:29 AM


thank you very much, and for responding. and severn i will remember you.

candy

Dream Chaser
Junior Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 32
South Carolina
6 posted 2000-12-09 06:56 PM


Candy, I liked your poem...I could relate to it.  Most of the time I have "got it good" but I'm still not happy.  Sometimes I feel that no one loves or cares.  Hang in there and take one day at a time!

Angel

P.S.  I'm also here if you want to talk.

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