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Dark Poetry #2

Outside the window

Kevin Rose
Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 64
Liverpool UK

0 posted 2000-12-07 09:52 AM

The view is of sunshine
late afternoon spring susnshine
the sky of clearest blue
the trees of cleanest green
It is if nature is loving
and holding all close
and making life truly beautiful

I long to be in that sunshine
feeling the warmth on my back
with a bounce in my step
and the joy in my heart.
But I am trapped in this room
with the nature outside
prevented fromfeeling the love.

I have felt that warmth on my back
even when nature has turned
sunshine came from your smile
and the love from your heart
but you have gone out the door
I see you through the window
I wish I was with you in the spring sunshine

Hardrock
Senior Member

since 2000-02-14

Posts 948
New Hampshire, USA

1 posted 2000-12-07 11:12 AM

kevin..well done. It has a kind of sad, but not really sad "feel" to it. I enjoyed it. Hardrock

dragonpoe
Senior Member

since 2000-11-12

Posts 608
Palm Bay, Florida

2 posted 2000-12-07 11:29 AM

well written with subtle emotions threading through the lines. Good imagery. Enjoyed it.

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

3 posted 2000-12-07 09:42 PM

Hi Kevin, I enjoyed your poem also. It has that feeling of confusion within emotions.
Sandra

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