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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-11-29 10:41 PM

A Sea of New

You reigned upon my thoughts today
as Wynter breezes stilled.
The cold had turned the rain of myst
to dustings on the sill.
Pressed upon the window, pained
my eyes beheld their sight.
Symmetrical each imprint was
they left their melting, white.

Feathered softly floating down,
large in size, they came.
Cooling in their beauty
yet warming, as they tamed
The hearts of all the children
those in "memory awe"
Who reached to touch, delighting in
the Wynter White in "fall".

Out the door to trace new steps
we left the old behind,
the skies were filled with wonderment
cleansing sad of mind.
Refreshed, I felt as hand in hand
the kisses reigned this way,
A sea of new to drift upon
as snowflakes fell today.

~Wynter Bliss

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2000-11-30 12:05 PM

so beautiful NT...lovely images you paint upon our window..

love the rhythm too

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-11-30 08:06 AM

Hey ~V~ you were up kinda late weren't you..oh I keep forgetting that time difference..*s

thanks hon

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

3 posted 2000-12-01 12:23 PM

This is one of those poems I wish I could have written. Great work.

Ronil (The sweet sound of summer sends serenity through my soul searching for that evermore solitude.)

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

4 posted 2000-12-01 01:18 AM

I hated winter until I read this! Now I just wish I had someone to walk hand in hand with then maybe it wouldn't seem so cold. Thanks for writing this and showing me that snow isn't so bad after all.

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

carolinadreams
Member

since 2000-07-20

Posts 142

5 posted 2000-12-01 02:41 AM

I wish I could be able to hold a hand. So little snow, not enough cold sheit.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

6 posted 2000-12-01 08:24 PM

Xeonox- I am sure you could have written it

thank you
~Wynter

Jeremy- if you only knew how wonderful it is to take a midnight walk in soft falling snow with the streetlights glowing and a warm hand to hold as you leave your prints behind...I just love it. And the funny thing Jeremy, is that you don't even feel the cold and the world is so peaceful too.

~Wynter...waiting now for that big snowfall to come and warm my heart

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2000-12-01 08:25 PM

carolinadreams- then you shall just have to come and visit the northeast..sometime...

thank you
~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-12-06 09:34 PM

Enjoyed reading your poem...James

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2000-12-07 09:30 PM

thank you james, its always nice to have you read and respond..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2000-12-07 09:45 PM

This should go down as a classic nature poem. You almost made the snow sound wonderful again. I remember as a child, that wonderment, as it fell, and running out in the freshly fallen winter wonderland.
(too bad all it means to me now is shoveling and sliding on the freeway)
Greatly poetic, Miss Wynter..
Sandra

Swamp¤Faeryie
Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 393
fairyland....of course;)

11 posted 2000-12-08 11:33 AM

beautiful beautiful poem!! i love snow,i love winter.People often scoff at me when i say that "aw you're just a kid wait till you have to shovel the stuff" I am just a kid,but i like to think i will always look forward to the beauty of winter no matter how much snow i have to shovel =] Loved your poem,it was trés merveilleux!!

swamp

"Though thy crest be shorn and shaven,thou "i said" art sure no craven." Ghastly grim and ancient raven,wandering from the nightly shore,tell me what

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