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Silent Longing |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738
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a longing to sit with you to laugh talk cry dream of what used to be. but you don't want those things. i sit in silent misery while you stare at the tv or a book. a silent plea what have i done? what didn't i do? |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
You just want to reach out and touch and it sounds like this person just doesn't want to be touched in any way, like they're reserved from you and the world. I know how this feels. Good job expressing yourself here. Joy |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
Communication breakdown, huh? A love gone sour. I too have been there, a horrible, frustrating thing. Good for losing weight though!  Uta Lotharingia "Wir wollen nicht Wert und Sinn ... wir wollen Unwert und Unsinn" Raoul Hausmann |
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tac Junior Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 28New Jersey |
This is exactly what I was feeling for so long. I can find no answers. I felt helpless. I went to the next step and found someone to fill that void. I guess I have been there too long, and I can't make a new relationship work. It is very painful. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
You live with them but are still alone.....Known these feelings well myself. Great work  I'll tell you this...... No eternal reward will forgive us now for wasting the dawn..... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I hear the feeling in this piece. First off, do not blame yourself. Second do not just sit there!! Go out and live. e-mail if ya wanna talk about it. I will listen. |
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sweetthing61401 New Member
since 2000-06-07
Posts 8 |
I went through the same experience with my last boyfriend. Finally I came to my senses and got on with my life. I realized that he didn't really love me and that I had alot of living to do and didn't need someone like him dragging me down |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
With 200 years of wisdom under my belt (oh, it's tight) I know that sometimes when you aren't getting response you need you try to change the other person, when sometimes you only need to change yourself. speaking for myself mind you, it brought about tremendous results! Kathleen "How do I love thee? Let me count the ways. I love thee to the depth and breadth and height My soul can reach, when feeling out of sight For the ends of Being and ideal Grace." Elizabeth Barrett Browning |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Thank you everyone for your kind words. A poem from the heart - which all of you have realised. Thanks for caring |
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Joel the wolf Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 1333Angels Camp |
yes kid I to have said this many times before as she sit watching tv. what a dredful life. I changed it, and now much better off. my heart out to you kid. take it and fly. Joel. I howl a mournful song, that echos within my chambered heart, for all to read? nay for all to feel. |
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Cowgirl Jane New Member
since 2000-06-15
Posts 8 |
I must add to the long list of sad testimonials! Because I have been in this situation as well. It stinks, don't it? You have clearly hit a human nerve. Very effective. Cowgirl Jane |
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Click Member
since 2000-06-11
Posts 202USA |
Powerful writing!! It moved me!! I know how it feels. Thanks. Click |
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