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breedlove Esq New Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 4 |
new day rises like a sleepless child anxious to climb over dark shapes and hurry across valley floors I touch your shoulder and you reply with unknown words then fold like a friendly dollar around my arm time is brickwalled unmovable for moments waiting for me to break it down with a kiss on your neck and now it is tomorrow Breedlove Esq. © Yesterday was easy. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
The title caught my attention and I read on. Glad I did. "new day rises like a sleepless child anxious to climb over dark shapes and hurry across valley floors" "then fold like a friendly dollar around my arm" Wonderfuly creative lines. Welcome to Dark Passions! Joy [This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 12-05-2000).] |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Welcome to Dark Passions! A place like no other  I hope in this forum you will find the support that you need. We tend to be a very friendly bunch of poets.  Peace, DkW No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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Hardrock Senior Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 948New Hampshire, USA |
Breedlove...Exceptional work here. I agree, very creative, very well done. I hope to see more from you. Hardrock |
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breedlove Esq New Member
since 2000-11-02
Posts 4 |
Joy, Kisses, and HardRock Thank you for the warm welcome |
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