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xEmperorEmber
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since 2000-03-28
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0 posted 2000-12-04 10:15 PM




And I know sometimes I come off better than i seem

I dont want that
I dont need that

I know that Iwill not live up to any of my dreams

But I ignore that
I adore that

Cheer yourself up and ignore the pain you think you feel

Cause it is nothing
All but nothing

And the silence prolongs the time your trying so hard to kill

But its failed you
I have failed you

And were free to devour our eternity
Nothing will pull my shadow away from me
Killing all that is holy and sacred before were even born
The irony of pain is the last thing to be adored

[This message has been edited by xEmperorEmber (edited 12-05-2000).]

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taramw
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since 2000-06-08
Posts 738

1 posted 2000-12-05 08:55 AM


Wow! Awesome piece of writing here!  

"And the silence prolongs the time your trying so hard to kill

But its failed you
I have failed you"

Very good indeed!  Loved the ending.  

~ Tara ~


"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish


Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
2 posted 2000-12-05 03:06 PM


It was wonderful Paul...glad to see you again...I thought maybe you died or something.
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In order to be good one must know evil.

~*Angel of Darkness*~





[This message has been edited by Dark Enchantress (edited 12-05-2000).]

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