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If tears could talk
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If tears could talk |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
If tear could talk I would make you feel my pain all you are is just a guy trying to get inside If tears could talk You would see I am so lost I' am not afraid of you your just another loss If tears could talk you'd look into my eyes I' am so hurt and you see yourself seeing I could not heal If those tears could talk Everyone would see you got so tired of me and... killed me It hurt you more than it hurt me all you hade to do was put that blade to my neck and your anger did the rest Daddys Girl... Is what it say's When you look at my gravestone Die in hell and remember me |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow. Ouch. I can feel that anger. Funny how anger hurts too. K |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Thanks for replying~I really think that anger is easy to write in poetry....but hey... Always~ Buff |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Buffy: Yes the anger is really showing up in this poem. Hope you can work things out with your dad. Its good you can let that anger out in a good way by using poetry. I feel sorry for those who can't. Take care.  ~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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shira Member
since 2000-12-12
Posts 88Hamburg, PA |
Wow.. this is really powerful. |
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