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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
Why cant they see there the ones who do this to me Please mom and dad it wasn't me stop yellin and listen so maybe you can believe me Just stop blaming poiting your finger always counting on me to do the right thing I sit down for dinner what are you blind? Can you see me? I don't eat I just get up and leave to my room where I look in the mirror and I see her that girl way too skinny, sad once I girl who loved to be happy... when I look back all I see is me Please mom and dad can you actually tell, That Im suffering Just help me...... Its too late cause I see you leaning over me Mom and Dad please stop crying Then they close the top to the coffin and leave me to rest in peace finally... |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Buffy!! welcome to passions and the dark forum. Love Buffy myself!! In Australia we eagerly waiting for the next series to begin after Christmas sometime. Hope this poem wasn't a self depiction... it paints a sad picture. If you need to talk feel free to email me. Good writing for you can feel the girl's or your pain... Check your email for a little something... Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
LOTS OF WARM HUGS BUFFY! Hey welcome to DP (dark passions), a place where ALL belong, no matter their warts! I read your poetry with a listening ear, and it made me think of my own teenage daughters, whom I know are struggling right now with many issues. I remember those days vividly....gezzzzz no one understood I thought! I got through them....and then realized that it was a tough time to prepare me for a tougher time! ADULTHOOD! EEEEEEEKKKKKKK! So although, I thought my parents did not understand me (and sometimes they did not), I made it! Just keep on writing and don't give up! K? We will listen and lend a helping hand, when we can. Take care Buffy and great poetry! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
First off ... Welcome to DP!  Secondly ... I felt the pain here and it was so sad. It took me back to when I was a teenager. I know it seems parents push you too much at times. But bare down and create your own personality from it. I never felt much love when I was growing up and to this day I still suffer from it. But each day I work on it ,along with the help from others. It can and does get better!!!Smiles, DkW If ya need to talk, I am here! Email me or ICQ me! No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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~*Buffy Summers*~ Junior Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 24Avondale,AZ,USA |
I hope you liked my poem. I enjoyed making it up. I love reading back on it when you think of more things to add.. Well Thanks a bunch Buff |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Buffy: Welcome to the dark side. I see you changed the title from Eating Disorder at Teen Explorer to this here now. Still a good poem either way. Hope things get better soon! Take care and I look forward to reading more poetry from you in the future!~Lisa~ ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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