Dark Poetry #2 |
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So Many Times |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland ![]() |
So many words left unspoken, So many things left undone, So many dreams unfulfilled, Leaving hearts as heavy as stone. So many times we should've said more, So many times we shouldn't have shut the door, So many times there were things we needed to hear, So much to say, in this our emotional war. So many times I heard your calling, And my soul keened to be with you, Yet foolish old me remained stubborn, For I felt there was nothing else I could do. So for that my love I apologise, We both made wrong decisions, And a life half lived is no consolation prize, Love is much more than reason or season. Forgive us Lord for our foolish pride, Misguided faith and responsibility, I know now how deserving we are, No finer union could there be. But perhaps we will never get to test the waters, To see if our love will float or hold true, Now so many more times we'll pause and think 'If only I could be with you!'. < !signature--> *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. [This message has been edited by Isis (edited 12-02-2000).] |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I can completely understand this, maybe there will be a chance to recapture your dream. I hope so. Sandra |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks Sandra ![]() *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
there's always going to be regret isn't there? I'm learning this. But not getting love that might be fulfilling for the rest of your life, that's got to be the worst regret. Good one, Isis. I enjoyed. Joy |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Love is much more than reason or season" Truer words were never spoken. . . beautiful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Deranger Member
since 2000-05-10
Posts 498Somewhere, between here and there |
One mistake...out of so many... So many... Spreading insanity, one post at a time "Way back in eighty-seven, where we bust rockstands till we get to heaven" |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
I liked this poem it made me cry a lot esp. the first 8 lines or so they were my favorite. "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Suzanne Arlene Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 377Ontario, Canada |
I think at some point in everybodies life they have done this.You have put it so well too.We all carry regrets in our hearts. Hopefully it doesn't stop us from moving forward. Great poem Suzanne |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Thanks my friends ![]() ![]() Ginners sorry to make you cry hon, but those first 8 lines are the essence of that situation and are my fav in the poem too!! Isis *I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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