More Than Fifty Thousand Stars

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Dark Poetry #2

More Than Fifty Thousand Stars

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

0 posted 2000-12-01 09:13 PM

Look Mary,
There are like fifty thousand stars out tonight
Yeah, but you can't see 'em through the clouds
But you know they are there right?
Yeah, 'cause they peek out and wink quick at ya
Stars winking, I like that image, Mary
Glad to be of service, Mommy
I love you more than those fifty thousand stars, Mary
I love you more than you'll know
I love ya too, Mommy

[This message has been edited by JOY 14 (edited 12-01-2000).]

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 2000-12-02 05:33 PM

Short, sweet and beautiful as a Mother myself it warmed the cockels of my heart

Isis

*I believe every time you put your words to paper, you change. Each feeling is set free, and you may follow.....*
~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.

JOY 14
Senior Member

since 1999-09-22

Posts 1419
Wisconsin USA

2 posted 2000-12-02 09:31 PM

I'm so glad.

Joy

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

3 posted 2000-12-03 08:18 AM

Wow!! I loved this!!

~ Tara ~

"A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2000-12-03 03:42 PM

I really liked this one. Simply wonderful!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Jannel
Member

since 2000-01-18

Posts 492
Muncie, IN, USA

5 posted 2000-12-03 08:26 PM

that is so pretty. i think of little nut brown hare in "guess how much i love you." really sweet.

jann eliazabeth

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