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Fever of the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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moonbeams glisten in the night when all is sound to sleep snowflakes silently tango outside your window dreams begin to creep shadows peek behind the curtain while lips of wind whispers good night cyan eyes roam over your body upon your skin they embark the fever of the night surrounds rising with cerulean tides waves of desire bound drowning in the potion of night crystal goblet on the night stand lonesome bubbles of champagne harmonizing to the firelight on dance floor of sapphire flames if only the night could never end on the wallpaper of discreet in the mirror of a dream reflections of smoke and ashes laying naked in moonbeams A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lonesome bubbles of champagne hmmmmmm..and wow to that last stanza..loved it... ~Wynter  "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
cyan eyes roam over your body" Liked it much, loved this line.... What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Jannel Member
since 2000-01-18
Posts 492Muncie, IN, USA |
i love the different blues. you always use such pretty images... jann elizabeth |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
This is going to sound very unprofessional, and hardly literary, but HUBBA HUBBA...you really know how to turn the heat up in here and I love it! Good work! Jeremy "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
wynter..i thought you would like that line the best ha..  jann..i try to add color images to my poetry if possible..glad you enjoyed kathleen..thank you for visiting kathleen jeremy..so glad you enjoyed Jeremy..thanks for peeking in.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes, yes!! Exactly! Love this. Sandra |
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Verve Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 348Singapore |
Yeah ... I do like this one a lot ... Simply sensual ... *sighs* ~Verve |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Sandra and Verve..thank you for reading...so glad you both liked.. HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Awesome!!! You capture things so well Victoria!~ Tara ~ "A poem should not mean, but be" - Archibald MacLeish |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you tara..i try ha..glad you like hon ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, sounds like someone's got the blues and what deep blues they are. Well done! Write on Kethry Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant - Thoreau |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love blues haa..pinks jades lavenders ha...thank you so much my aussie friend.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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